第一名~~~吼吼~~~（红包申请中）

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我的一位好朋友要参加希望英语比赛，稿子已经写好了，可是还有些小错误，结尾也不是很满意。但是这周日就要比赛了，所以时间很紧张（还要准备一些其他的）

所以请各位英文高手，帮忙看一下这篇稿子，提一些建议和修改，以及该如何收尾。真的非常非常感谢~~~嘿嘿~~（因为我的英语水平……）

下面是稿子：

My colorful youth

Nobody knows what life is like,for we can not see it,nor can we touch it.But i believe my youth is colorful,just like a rainbow.

My youth is red,the color of flame.It stands for passion.As a member of the new generation of 21st  century,my youth is full of dreams.Although the way to my dreams may be rugged.But I'lltry my best toface the variouskinds of challenges.Because I'm young,I'm active.

My youth is blue,the color of water.It is symbol of flexible.As we all know,wate doesn't have a fixed shape,when it comes to a narrow place,it becomes narrow;when it comes to a wide place,it becomes wide.There must be a lot of difficulties in my life,so I will be flexible in order to adapt to different kinds of conditions--just like water.

My youth is also green,the color of lives.It represents hope.No one can live without hope.Do you still remember the May 12 earthquake happened in Sichuan?There were many people covered under the ruins then,but they had a same hope,there is a sound shouting in their hearts--I want to live!

My youth is golden,the color of my childhood.It indicates purity.In my world,there is no cheat dark or unhappiness.Instead,it is full of honesty and joy.

Youth is a wonderful vision of every child,and happy memories of the middle-aged or elderly.

Luckily,I have the youth,so in order to grasp my youth,in order to show true selves on this century stage.Let's go!
That's all.Thank you!

再次感谢~~~~(*^__^*) 嘻嘻……

[ 本帖最后由 兰依楠 于 2009-5-12 17:14 编辑 ]

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是朋友的作文啦~~本来想找老师辅导的。可是放假了，时间也不够了，所以就……
说实话，她也不知道写什么好（自命题），如果写得太难生词太多的话，可能会到时候一紧张就忘记了……唉唉~~对于这个东西，我也是无能为力啊~~所以很需要帮助么~~(*^__^*) 嘻嘻……不过很感谢你们的意见，再次感谢~~笑~~~

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(*^__^*) 嘻嘻……
晋级了！！
复赛除笔试外，还有两分钟的自命题演讲（不知道讲什么才又有新意，又能吸引裁判眼球），还有三分钟的才艺表演，4月30日去比赛~希望大家多提些意见~非常感谢~~

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呵呵~~~最近忙得忘记这个了~~~
告诉大家一个好消息！！！
第一名！！！(*^__^*) 嘻嘻……虽然不是特等奖，但是已经很厉害了，河北省的第一名只有25个名额，参加者有好几千人呢~~特等奖只有四个~~~已经很不错了~~~嘿嘿~~~










一会去申请个红包庆祝一下~~~
本人不是王老五，所以小小红包也是我的一点心意~~~谢谢大家~~~

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那啥红包怎么申请啊？我弄不好~~~