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回复: 偶也需要建議 要寫一封五專的study plan
[QUOTE=honeyrabbit321][QUOTE=无情]Why reveal your weakness so soon? = =[/QUOTE]
how would i know, my mom wrote that
she changed my "seriously,i suck at spelling, and i mean that by all three languages." to some crapy old lady sentence%&128[/QUOTE]%&117 I would do that too if I were her (omit the lady part,for I'm no lady)...= =|||
You really shouldn't run around telling people (especially your teachers) that you are
bad at something and NOT metioning you are determined to change it...= =|||
Gives them a bad impression...you wouldn't want that, right? (please say no...%&238 )
You can keep that part as you like but add I am determined to improve my English,
especially my writing skills so I would not be a disgrace to XXXXX school.
Maybe not a DISGRACE (duh.they can see it's not your writing...different styles...)
But...something like that...
%&167 Some tips...
1) Compliment the school...(just don't overdo it...)
one or two sentences will be enough...otherwise...%&153
2) Be confident...if you are not good at something,add I will work hard to improve at
the end of the sentence...First impression is important...
You goal is to get enrolled,so you must act (write, in this case) as if they are doing
something STUPID and EVIL if they do not let you in.
3) Let a trusted adult (teacher/guardians) read it and give you some feedback.
You can't be totally off and say you are THE SUPERGENIUS when you are just this average kid...
Lying is not good...but you can just remember 2 weaknesses and forget the other 10 when writing your application...
Well,as long as they didn't ask "Do you suck at spelling?" you don't have to tell them
"I suck at spelling."
%&032 Example
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"OH MY GOSH,you mean I didn't mention that I suck at spelling when writing my
application? Ooops!"
(But I'm already in the school,you can't just kick me out can you?)
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It's ok if this happens later on during the year.
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"Look at your application! You said you are great at spelling,and now I get a
four-year-old's diary handed in as an essay???!!!!"(a mad teacher,with hair on fire)[I have a bad sense of humour...]
"....."(a big Ooops can't save you now...)
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Lying...is a bad bad bad thing to do... |
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