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偶也需要建議 要寫一封五專的study plan

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发表于 2004-10-26 04:54:44 |显示全部楼层

回复: 偶也需要建議 要寫一封五專的study plan

先看看兔子滴first draft吧。。。如果E搞得太过分了就一定要改。。。= =|||

PS:个人认为本性还是先藏起来比较好。。。
因为万一看你study plan的老师是个$#^%$&^就不好了。。。= =|||
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好了。。。兔子看信箱。。。honeyrabbit那个。。。

PS:还是表那么E搞比较好。。。台湾老师不知道看不看Animorph。。。如果他不喜欢那套书就不会想给你高分了。。。= =|||

PSPS:括号里滴东西可以去掉。。。= =|||
咱把pig换成了some unknown animal。。。个人认为把自己比喻成猪有点¥%*%……*。。。= =|||
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[QUOTE=honeyrabbit321]看信箱?

E M [email="[email protected]][email protected][/email]? 要下宰文件 怕有病毒
他絕對不可能看過animorphs 那是兒童書%&061
為啥要把括號去掉?

有啥辦法嘛
偶天生長的像豬%&189[/QUOTE]
寒。。。DOC文件怎么可能有病毒捏。。。%&029 %&029

PS:EM索咱滴。。。改名称去。。。= =|||
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[QUOTE=honeyrabbit321][QUOTE=无情]Why reveal your weakness so soon? = =[/QUOTE]

how would i know, my mom wrote that
she changed my "seriously,i suck at spelling, and i mean that by all three languages." to some crapy old lady sentence%&128[/QUOTE]%&117 I would do that too if I were her (omit the lady part,for I'm no lady)...= =|||

You really shouldn't run around telling people (especially your teachers) that you are
bad at something and NOT metioning you are determined to change it...= =|||

Gives them a bad impression...you wouldn't want that, right? (please say no...%&238  )

You can keep that part as you like but add I am determined to improve my English,
especially my writing skills so I would not be a disgrace to XXXXX school.

Maybe not a DISGRACE (duh.they can see it's not your writing...different styles...)
But...something like that...

%&167 Some tips...
1) Compliment the school...(just don't overdo it...)
one or two sentences will be enough...otherwise...%&153

2) Be confident...if you are not good at something,add I will work hard to improve at
the end of the sentence...First impression is important...

You goal is to get enrolled,so you must act (write, in this case) as if they are doing
something STUPID and EVIL if they do not let you in.

3) Let a trusted adult (teacher/guardians) read it and give you some feedback.
You can't be totally off and say you are THE SUPERGENIUS when you are just this average kid...
Lying is not good...but you can just remember 2 weaknesses and forget the other 10 when writing your application...

Well,as long as they didn't ask "Do you suck at spelling?" you don't have to tell them
"I suck at spelling."

%&032 Example
===================================================
"OH MY GOSH,you mean I didn't mention that I suck at spelling when writing my
application? Ooops!"
(But I'm already in the school,you can't just kick me out can you?)


It's ok if this happens later on during the year.

===================================================
"Look at your application! You said you are great at spelling,and now I get a
four-year-old's diary handed in as an essay???!!!!"(a mad teacher,with hair on fire)[I have a bad sense of humour...]

"....."(a big Ooops can't save you now...)


Lying...is a bad bad bad thing to do...
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[QUOTE=honeyrabbit321]偶是寫bookworm阿

impresive%&060
沒想到你也有兩把刷子
好建議
不過偶像豬這點要留著!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!%&070[/QUOTE]寒。。。bookworm索一个词。。。

PS:寒。。。这样一说咱就想看看兔子滴真实面目了。。。%&207
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