生死极端 发表于 2004-4-25 01:22:11

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中文

透明

友谊是脆弱的
而且是最不容易维护与维持的关系

当我看到那张面无表情的脸
我知道我们的友谊尽了

你从来没有生气的表情
最大限度也只是皱眉
我们曾是那么好的朋友
现在
我们只是陌生人

以后呢？
我们又是什么？

透明的空气是人类的生命
而我只希望在你偶尔失神的时候
会想起不完美的我


english

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fiendship is fragile
and the hardest to safeguard and preserve

when i saw your face with no mood
i knew we were not friends anymore

you never have shown your anger
the limit noly a frowm
we were good friends
but now...
we are only strangers

what about the future?
what are we being?

inbisible air is the life of humans
i only wish that when you be inattentive
you will miss me that not perfect





我写的诗
是为了自己
也是为了作业

请帮忙更正英文错误的地方(以中文为准)
谢谢!~~~

生死极端 发表于 2004-4-25 01:23:43

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%&016

honeyrabbit321 发表于 2004-4-25 01:28:39

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when i saw your face with no mood

生死极端 发表于 2004-4-25 01:31:38

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%&004

生死极端 发表于 2004-4-25 01:32:57

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谢谢兔子~~

生死极端 发表于 2004-4-25 01:34:23

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写得怎么样呢?

honeyrabbit321 发表于 2004-4-25 01:39:45

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表再存水啦%&142

感覺像是直接翻譯%&018
非常怪怪的%&018

生死极端 发表于 2004-4-25 02:10:47

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就是直接翻译~~~
因为我又不是翻译~~~~~
而且英文烂死了~~

洗衣机 发表于 2004-4-25 05:13:52

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现回了贴再说！ 而后再飘走~~~

生死极端 发表于 2004-4-26 01:34:36

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楼上的~~
你都不帮忙~~~

洗衣机 发表于 2004-4-26 03:16:10

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我E语差啊,再闪~~~

Amy_xuru 发表于 2004-4-26 03:37:20

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ME TOO~~~
闪ING...

生死极端 发表于 2004-4-26 11:45:14

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喂喂~~
怎样也比我英语好哇~~~
都不帮忙~~~
555555555555555555555555555555555555555555~~~~~

Meitantei 发表于 2004-4-26 12:31:07

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i didn't understand the chinese version of the poem that well... so... i tried my best to help...
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fiendship is fragile (poetic... but weird...)
and the hardest to safeguard and preserve (i don't understand this at all-_-)

when i saw your face with no mood (when i saw your expressionless face)?
i knew we were not friends anymore

you never have shown your anger (i'd perfer the phrase: you've never shown your anger)but from my understanding of the chinese version, i don't think this is what you're trying to say...
the limit noly a frowm (???????????? do you mean frown? the worst you would do is to frown???? i'm lost..... -_-|||||||)
we were good friends
but now...
we are only strangers

what about the future?
what are we being? (what will we be)

inbisible air is the life of humans (THE invisble air is the life of humans)
i only wish that when you be inattentive (i only wish that when you are... inattentive!?)
you will miss me that not perfect (you'll miss the imperfect me)
faints... i know that's not very helpful but o well... pretend that i've never written this...

生死极端 发表于 2004-4-27 10:00:11

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love you very much! -Meitantei
亲亲~~~~~~~~~

生死极端 发表于 2004-4-28 10:56:33

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感谢~~
帮我很多~~~~~~~

youhan 发表于 2004-4-30 10:53:09

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汗汗~闪为先.偶E语差

生死极端 发表于 2004-4-30 11:42:36

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at least better than me~~~
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