浅草 发表于 2005-4-20 13:26:04

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Gravity
Been a long road to follow, been
there and gone tomorrow
                                  ---------------Gravity  



He followed his dream, found the way home

She followed him, worried about him

Followed, just followed



When night fell on the city

The moon rose

He wore a mask

He acted



She stared at him

And followed him as usual

But she couldn’t touch him

Followed, just followed



He ran so fast, far away from her view

Only for making her not worry

He didn’t want her be in danger



Everything becomes a blur when you travel beyond a certain speed

He had zero gravity in the sky

She could only see an indistinct shadow in the sky

It put her into the shade

She didn’t notice her feet

She fell down for the gravity from the sky



That moment

She was afraid of her own shadow

That moment

He stopped

Turned back to her side

Saved her at the end



It's not nature that she wasn’t surprised when she pulled off his mask

She knew it long time before

Merely didn’t say… …



That moment

She said

‘No matter how don’t let me down, don’t leave me any more ’

That moment

He said

‘I will’ he gave her a big smile, ‘I’m not kidding, although my name is Kid’



She hugged him

That moment

She felt the gravity of him all… …
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执念 发表于 2005-4-21 10:29:59

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Angels & Demons偶没看过,也不太清楚你文章的前后文是什么,MS是快哀吧,能用英语创造意境真的了不起啊。

It's not nature that she wasn’t surprised when she pulled off his mask
你是想说NATURAL吗?


‘No matter how don’t let me down, don’t leave me any more ’



我觉得好象应该是NO MATTER WHAT

浅草 发表于 2005-4-21 13:12:38

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是NATURAL饿~~~~偶打错了~~~~~谢谢饿~~~真想找个大人帮忙改改~~~

毛毛虫的蓝色 发表于 2005-4-21 13:19:37

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英文啊…………

准备考四级的某虫走开好了…………
最近看英语看到郁闷啊…………

浅草 发表于 2005-4-21 13:21:21

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偶三级还么考过~~~~~~~~~

血色珊瑚樱 发表于 2005-4-21 18:29:08

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我……我E文白痴……飘走……很不错很不错……

不过……有中文版吗?让我看明白些,然后依据情况会增加威望……

浅草 发表于 2005-4-22 12:10:19

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我……我E文白痴……飘走……很不错很不错……

不过……有中文版吗?让我看明白些,然后依据情况会增加威望……
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千代羽 发表于 2005-4-25 03:49:47

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<Angels & Demons>最近在丹麦热销呢,不过同学说没有<The Da Vinci Code>好看。

浅草 发表于 2005-4-27 18:35:24

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<Angels & Demons>最近在丹麦热销呢,不过同学说没有<The Da Vinci Code>好看。
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