善恶的彼岸（事务所篇连载结束，谢谢支持。）

panzerVI

要说这个文有啥建议的话～我就建议多点动作戏……至少推的时候也多添点伤～～

panzerVI

对了关于这个“3-老虎和咖啡强烈要求开场有段H,我也写了后来他又说悬念于是又3了......”

其实我不是说要开场一段和小兰姐的H么= =然后就可以紧接一段打斗戏-v-

panzerVI

ls又出现了

panzerVI

原帖由 可奈依 于 2009-7-26 14:19 发表
这个打斗戏使得您的文变成了武侠+后宫文。。。。。

这不是我的文= =

panzerVI

原帖由 艺语的雨 于 2009-7-26 15:40 发表
.....................

MLGB的～～～

听从亚的建议解释一下：

   IAI Introduces New Medium Laser Guided Weapon

    IAI/MBT is unveiling here the MLGB, - Medium Laser Guided Bomb, offering dual-mode guidance employing GPS and terminal laser guidance. The weapon comprising an 80 kg warhead offers pinpoint accuracy under all weather conditions. The MLGB kit employs the warhead, terminal seeker and guidance system, attached to a wing assembly that retracts after release. Despite the relatively small warhead, MLGB is well capable of performing precision attack and close air support, while minimizing risk to friendly forces and collateral damage. It can effectively strike buildings, bunkers and moving or stationary ‘time critical targets’. The key to such improved performance is the weapon’s ‘trajectory shaping’ capability, enabling mission planners to carefully plan the flight profile, target approach and impact angle of the weapon.

    According to IAI the weapon can be employed from various types of aerial vehicles. While IAI introduces the new weapon, sales of the larger Griffin 3, Next Generation Laser Guided Bomb (NGLGB) Kits continue, the company recently received orders for the kits worth tens of millions of dollars.

    The GRIFFIN System provides much better hit accuracy than previous generation kits, even in high wind conditions or when aiming for a moving target. GRIFFIN 3 also offers trajectory shaping capability, which, when used with a penetration warhead, is integral to achieving maximum penetration.

[ 本帖最后由 panzerVI 于 2009-7-26 18:05 编辑 ]

panzerVI

那我也没自己写- -何况这个跟种族没有一毛钱关系好不好

panzerVI

原帖由 Black.Sirius 于 2009-7-26 18:26 发表

说实话我没看懂你们在说什么…………

我其实也是糊涂的

panzerVI

不是土狼么

panzerVI

原帖由 JacieNL 于 2009-7-28 15:11 发表

婚外＋强推　俺已经看得这样——　囧　——了，要是鸭子采纳这个建议，估计我就直接呈现球状闪电后效果了

这是恶搞魂的燃烧……如果能达到此效果～我很欣慰

panzerVI

原帖由 哀奥里亚 于 2009-7-28 21:33 发表
博士留给兰J了~

不许反悔啊……关注ing

panzerVI

实际过程还是省略号了嘛～

不过剧情真的没有任何发展= =

等着看到底是啥

panzerVI

也不能光H了不是……总得干点穿衣服干的事儿吧

原帖由 可奈依 于 2009-7-29 17:13 发表
博士留给虎。。。。

刚发现这帖……太肥不好吃啊～～

panzerVI

要不中段省了直接开嘲讽= =

panzerVI

嗯><昨天写过渡写好了都1W字...

panzerVI

1W字我大概也爬了一旬|||不过上1W字爬了俩旬><

panzerVI

2W是啥…………毕业论文么

panzerVI

原帖由 mikyo 于 2009-8-2 20:49 发表
我还想说咂好几天没动静了~您写的比我想象的含蓄~

同……全省略号了

panzerVI

好像你是说写最长H的……结果刚开始就结束了……

panzerVI

我的理解是某工有早泄的问题= =

panzerVI

顶上来我还以为更新了……那就再踩一脚～