贞子水平有限,很多都翻的很怪,请大家纠正。。。%&009作者: lovelymanzzh 时间: 2005-12-15 15:55 标题: 回复: 烦请帮忙译成中英文各一份 [quote=萤の蝶舞枫铃]本来还有几出错误,没想到你都给改过来了
速度有够快,哼……
下次再挑你的错,哇卡卡,我是恶魔[/quote]
%&009 看的太急,这个地方没改,哇卡卡……作者: 夜色千樱 时间: 2005-12-15 17:07 标题: 回复: 烦请帮忙译成中英文各一份 an informal date in the evening(小是指非正式的吧,个人理解~)
who is the kid missing in the Fiesta of Summer
another personality,invisible of myself
loneliness of the summer vacation
let's go study
the day that will never come back
a sudden breakdown
the friend as manager of a hammam
times out of memory(这个是意译的,所以不能字字相应)
a bit beyond friendship,though (以though置末作让步状语隐晦"恋人未满",以免赘余)
rival is princess
Ferris Wheel of love
waiting since off school
school fiesta is a scramble
这个不明白
what's most important is lost(缺乏比较,故去最高级定冠词,以most表非常重要)
因为本人日本语水平非常有限,因此参考中文翻译为主作出以上翻译
请多包涵.作者: 百目鬼 贞子 时间: 2005-12-17 00:03 标题: 回复: 烦请帮忙译成中英文各一份 [quote=夜色千樱]an informal date in the evening(小是指非正式的吧,个人理解~)
who is the kid missing in the Fiesta of Summer
another personality,invisible of myself
loneliness of t...[/quote]
好棒的英文。。。 好崇拜~~~~~~~!!
我真的还MADAMADA... T T.......到了大学一定改过自新,一生悬命地好好学英文(和日文,可能的话)。。。