中考了，发个HB[HB领取时间已过，感谢大家支持]

梦在我心

中考终于算是完了

科目		成绩
语文		86
物理		91
化学		64
数学		106
英语（笔试）		70
历史（开卷）		54
政治（开卷）		51
英语（听力）		20
英语（口语）		10
体育		40
生物		合格
地理		合格

物理（实验操作）		合格
化学（实验操作）		合格

政策性加分		5
共计		597（已达省重点四星级高中投档线）

diperfect

楼主，成绩不错的说，比我强多了。。。

锟斤拷一锟斤拷

看来论坛散财攒RP真的有用啊，LZ对出来的成绩满意吗？
我们这边550+的上高中是没问题了，600可以去普通+的高中了呢。

锟斤拷一锟斤拷

看来论坛散财攒RP真的有用啊，LZ对出来的成绩满意吗？
我们这边550+的上高中是没问题了，600可以去普通+的高中了呢。

新一or兰

中考什么的...对于我来说已经一年了呢

yanyan_13669

考试结束了啊，来领个红包，不过还是祝贺你啦

TiaHuang1927

恭喜楼主考试顺利结束

写经换鹤

毕业路过【。一晃多少年。。

雍熙成昭

恭喜楼主可以考上省重点四星级高中

Flom

这么多门！

yzc6234869

祝考试顺利~！

zhouboyang

请楼主接受小弟这份迟来的祝福！祝您考出好成绩。

柯爱英樱

啊。。。结束了么  祝金榜提名~~

领妹

看来来晚了+1

davidchow

全是满分呢

513501265

夔zzZ 发表于 2015-6-12 09:51
我来从行文的角度来改改，偏文法语法概念，请思索后接受。看时间貌似楼主没准可能已经在考试了= =，但是还 ...

http://www.usingenglish.com/forum/threads/116689-relax-myself

513501265

With the approaching of the summer, [WORDINESS]  As the summer approaches
I will reach the first turning point which is very important in my life. [WORDINESS] I am reaching the first pivotal point in my life. (Turning point implies immense importance )
I have been a member of a junior middle school for three years. [WORDINESS] I have been a middle school student for three years,
During the three years, I experienced a lot, including happiness and sadness, angry and fear. [AWKWARD WORDING] and have been through moments of joy and tears, anger and fear.
I will finish grade 9 in several days. Before the finally examination I have something to say. But I don't know what to say. [COULD BE BETTER] It's only 9 days until the graduation and an ultimate test waits ahead. I want to say something but don't know what to begin with.
Perhaps I could complain about that time goes by so quickly and the life of grade 9 is so busy and boring.
Now that everything will come to an end, and I will be able to have a long holiday to relax. [COULD BE BETTER]
Perhaps I can complain about the insane passage of time and the ordeals I underwent this year, or I can babble about the long break I've been dreaming of after everything is done.
Before the finally examintion,I can't relax in order to get my ideal marks. [IN NEED OF SMOOTH CONNECTION]
But before the test, works need to be done and efforts need to be paid to score my ideal percentile.
I have something to talk about before the final examination, but the logic is not that smooth in my mind. [LOGIC!] You can see my words are a little jaggy, but I just feel like talking right now.  

Here are the key points：
I will hand out my wealth[6 coins per person] from June 13, 2015 09:00:00 to july 1,2015 23:59:59..
Wish all would be well in the final exam. [Good luck!]

玉娇龙

考完了，祝取得好成绩

灰原~哀

中考加油 领个红包

546225650

祝愿楼主中考顺利啊！