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[综合] [這叫做沒有向]Before Vermouth (還沒打完~嘿嘿~別打我~)

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发表于 2017-2-18 08:01:43 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览
本帖最后由 angelicachao 于 2017-2-18 08:01 编辑

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The old man stared out at the gloomy storm.
A raindrop came passed one of the loose windows onto his hair.
Another day was passing away, yet he still couldn't find a solution to the orphanage's bankruptcy.
He heard a faint sob of a baby from the frontsteps.
As usual, there was no one there except the baby.
There had not been a baby in the orphange for several years.
"Perhaps this will be a new start," he thought as he picked up the child.
A peice of paper dropped to the ground.
He bent down to pick it up, but it was too late, the paper was wet, and all that was left of the words on it was a black smudge.

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"Smudge! What are you wating for? Get out of our way!"

She sighed, and moved to the side.
As long as she remembered, she was Smudge.
Or at least that's how everyone called her except for Papa, the principal of the children's home, who insisted on calling her Blackie.
"What kind of a name is that? A dog?"she thought.

The boys had been playing in the mud, she could see that from their muddy clothes.
She frowned at the muddy footsteps they left on the rusty old mat.
One of the boys
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(未完待續~請多多指教~)



Vermouth

She was falling... An endless fall...
She could feel death as the ground came closer than ever...
The smell of wet cement filled her nostrils...
"So...This is the end..."

For a moment everything went still...
She heard a girl screaming and crying for help...
A hand seized her arm...
"Why did you save me?"
"Is a reason nesessary? I don't know why you would kill someone. But as for saving someone...A logical mind isn't needed, right?"

"Angel...Cool guy...," she murmured.

Gasping, Vermouth woke up. The alarm clock started to buzz. The sun was shining through the window. It was just the start of another day.

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发表于 2017-2-18 15:21:42 |只看该作者
Ummm……
虽然是用英文写的,但是完全没有长句子,感觉理解起来并不难,但是想要出彩也并不容易呢……
这个分割线以下的是……已经想好的结尾……吗?
期待接下来的内容
PS:吐槽一下,名字起的真的太随意了啊……

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angelicachao  wa hahaha~ 臨時起意寫的~~  发表于 2017-2-18 16:14
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梦里梦到醒不来的梦。
忘掉有过的家,小餐台沙发雪柜及两份红茶.
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