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浅草

饿~~~~~貌似 crescentheights  你~~拼错了~~第17楼的饿~~你自己打的饿~~~remined ~~~偶打的是reminded~~~~~汗~~~

freelancer

天使与魔鬼是本好书啊，个人觉得写文不必太在意语法啦，意境到了就好，期待后文

conan5471

怎么，没续吗？

以为会更新的说，催文ing……

浅草

正在打文中~~~不过应该是独立的几个章节~~
freelancer ~~个人觉得写文不必太在意语法啦，意境到了就好~~~赞同~~~

浅草

PART 2%&107 %&107 %&107
A puff of free wind ~~~~
She was a pure countryside small girl

He was a sunshine honest little boy

They were neighbours

They always played on a small hill

They grew up together



Everyone thought they would get married to each other in the future

But their guess was wrong

The things came to a different side

Nobody knew why ……



When she left the village

On a dusky red twilight

On that small hill

They made promise to each other

They were sure they would meet again ……



Years later ……

She was back on a dusky red twilight

But everything was changed

Despite they really met again

Their promise were broken

She became a scientist

He became a celebrant

She believed in science

He believed in God

Their point of view were different

The division was growing up

They hated each other

Because she became a member of Illuminati

Because he took a vow of celibacy



The church promulgated an order for the arrest of Illuminati' s member

She knew he would attack herself

But he didn' t

He saw a lot of innocent people were killed

He was kindhearted

He hated deeply

He didn' t want to see any one else would be killed in the future

Especially her

He decided to help her

He released her and took her away

That moment

He betrayed his belief

That moment

She eventually knew his love

The seed of their love was growing up

They loved each other like they used to be



But the church captured them when they ran on that small hill

They thought her was a witch  

They decided kill her with fire punishment,

Like coping with other women scientists



When she was bound to the pillar

When they made a fire

The wind blew fiercely

Everybody closed eyes



When it ceased the wind

When they could open their eyes

They found she was disappeared ……



On a dusky red twilight

On that small hill

You could see a cemetery

It said, KODOU RAN&KODOU SHINICHI   

They would stay together forever

Nobody could break up them ……



On that small hill

Do you still remember me  

A puff of free wind ……Angel and demon……
终于打好了~~~~累饿~~~~~~~~~%&178

浅草

刚刚出去回来~~~热死了~~~~还以为今天会下雨的说~~~~
正在想下篇写虾米~~马上做作业去~~作业哦多的饿~~~~~~妈妈米啊~~~~~~~

conan5471

觉得总是在重复着某个画面，

红色的曙光下，一缕微风吹过，天使与恶魔。

I wonder who is main character in part 2, Ai ro Lan? Who is that boy in part 2, I feel confused.

小树叶子

英语啊...偶完全无语....
包包是强人嘛!!!看起来好高大好耀眼啊......> <
洒泪支持ING.....

明天似乎是延安中学的什么节...??听说过吗?

灰原小小哀

延安中学的什么节？不清楚的说`

叶子，你看懂了多少？

兰水晶

这个结局实在是……
唉……

浅草

[QUOTE=conan5471]觉得总是在重复着某个画面，

红色的曙光下，一缕微风吹过，天使与恶魔。

I wonder who is main character in part 2, Ai ro Lan? Who is that boy in part 2, I feel confused.[/QUOTE]
On a dusky red twilight

On that small hill

You could see a cemetery

It said, KODOU RAN&KODOU SHINICHI   %&102

They would stay together forever

Nobody could break up them ……


my friend ~~don't feel confused~~~%&123 %&123

浅草

[QUOTE=兰水晶]这个结局实在是……
唉……[/QUOTE]
%&133 %&133 %&133 往昔之井中汲取的皮毛~~~
恶俗ING~~~~只能用英语表达~~用中文真的是太恶俗了~~~%&055
刚写完了~~~PART 3~~~争取时间打上来~~~~还是英文的%&169
标题为~~~GRAVITY~~~~%&140 %&140
暂定的PART 4为恶搞某忆的文~~~这次是中文的~~%&197
某包的KUSO以及OTAKU 精神将得以发扬~~~哦呵呵~~~%&012 %&012 %&012 %&012


今天做作业的时候~~偶总算是领会到了吵架的真正奥义~~
对楼的女人吼起来不亚于疯狗~~~~吵啊~~~~%&105

小树叶子

[QUOTE=浅草]%&133 %&133 %&133 往昔之井中汲取的皮毛~~~
恶俗ING~~~~只能用英语表达~~用中文真的是太恶俗了~~~%&055
刚写完了~~~PART 3~~~争取时间打上来~~~~还是英文的%&169
标题为~~~GRAVITY~~~~%&140 %&140
暂定的PART 4为恶搞某忆的文~~~这次是中文的~~%&197
某包的KUSO以及OTAKU 精神将得以发扬~~~哦呵呵~~~%&012 %&012 %&012 %&012


今天做作业的时候~~偶总算是领会到了吵架的真正奥义~~
对楼的女人吼起来不亚于疯狗~~~~吵啊~~~~%&105[/QUOTE]

对包包的精神支持～！！偶可是看到英语就头大
考试考了个６０偶那个高兴啊．．．５５５５５

兰水晶

恶搞某忆的文……
那最好用英文，那样她不耐烦看，就不会被报复了……
至少偶素这么想DI……

天使·兰

It reminded they of the past

In the same place they met the first time

They promised to each other they would stay together in future

兰水晶

楼上的是啥意思啊？
是写得好呢？还是有语法错误啊？

浅草

[QUOTE=兰水晶]恶搞某忆的文……
那最好用英文，那样她不耐烦看，就不会被报复了……
至少偶素这么想DI……[/QUOTE]
%&170 %&170 呵呵~~~那偶打两篇好了~~一篇英文的~~一篇中文的~~~很早以前写的~~加上昨天写的饿~~~%&106
%&241 %&241 %&241 %&241
[QUOTE=小树叶子]对包包的精神支持～！！偶可是看到英语就头大
考试考了个６０偶那个高兴啊．．．５５５５５[/QUOTE]
偶自己英文也不见的有好啊~~~~%&056 %&056 %&056

[QUOTE=天使·兰]It reminded they of the past

In the same place they met the first time

They promised to each other they would stay together in future[/QUOTE]
大人请鞭策偶吧~~~~发狠话骂吧~~~%&070 %&070 偶皮很厚的%&134 %&134 有话尽情说~~~~有泪尽情流~~~%&191 %&191

兰水晶

有个很奇怪的问题，为什么要叫楼主包包啊？
难道楼主姓包？

54我好了……

浅草

猜对了~~~~差不多了~~~~~

兰水晶

现在咱的一个同学……
她的昵称是包子……