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家教叫交一篇英语短文，大家帮帮忙，写一篇关于柯南的英语短文~只要跟柯南有关就行了……不用太长……顺便顾及一下我是初一学生……太难的容易漏陷~嘻嘻……回复：
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Kudo Shinichi, a high school drop out, went to a them park called “Wild and Crazy” with his boyfriend one day. He solved a case and found out a men in black was trading with aliens. He was hit by men in black number one and force to eat a drug. Unfortunately he didnt die, but he had a serious problem with diarrhea the next morning. The problem was so bad he had to change his name and move to Papa new Guiana. His new name was Edogawa Conan.回复：
最初由 无事小魔鬼 发布This is a good chance to pratice and improve your English writing skill, so don't ask anybody to write for you!
right!
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%&018两位都水水~~~
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最初由 Amy_xuru 发布搭挡上MSN
现在上了，人呢
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最初由 honeyrabbit321 发布Kudo Shinichi, a high school drop out, went to a them park called “Wild and Crazy” with his boyfriend one day. He solved a case and found out a men in black was trading with aliens. He was hit by me．．．
喷。。。
某情严重失血。。。= =|||
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HOHO~~~这就是英语上长的时间~~~回复：
最初由 honeyrabbit321 发布Kudo Shinichi, a high school drop out, went to a them park called “Wild and Crazy” with his boyfriend one day. He solved a case and found out a men in black was trading with aliens. He was hit by me．．．
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i've written a summary for conan(obviously not as creative and original as rabbit's summary.......)
if you're intereste it's in my website: http://www.conankun.com/summary.shtml
note: that's for reference only... plz do not copy that word for word....
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don't plagiarize回复：
最初由 无情 发布最初由 honeyrabbit321 发布
Kudo Shinichi, a high school drop out, went to a them park called “Wild and Crazy” with his boyfriend one day. He solved a case and found out a men in bl．．．
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最初由 Meitantei 发布最初由 honeyrabbit321 发布
Kudo Shinichi, a high school drop out, went to a them park called “Wild and Crazy” with his boyfriend one day. He solved a case and found out a men in bl．．．
換IP阿
之前都上不去阿%&004
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最初由 无情 发布最初由 honeyrabbit321 发布
Kudo Shinichi, a high school drop out, went to a them park called “Wild and Crazy” with his boyfriend one day. He solved a case and found out a men in bl．．．
我也汗....|||
无语了....兔子好厉害.....
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He was hit by men in black number one and force to eat a drug.how about “he was bit by a rabbit number one and force to eat a carrot……