自认为英语好的人请进~~~

紫雪蝶 · 发表于 2004-4-24 13:27:48

家教叫交一篇英语短文，大家帮帮忙，写一篇关于柯南的英语短文~只要跟柯南有关就行了……不用太长……顺便顾及一下我是初一学生……太难的容易漏陷~嘻嘻……

无事小魔鬼 · 发表于 2004-4-24 16:41:56

This is a good chance to pratice and improve your English writing skill, so don't ask anybody to write for you!

honeyrabbit321 · 发表于 2004-4-24 21:41:44

Kudo Shinichi, a high school drop out, went to a them park called “Wild and Crazy” with his boyfriend one day. He solved a case and found out a men in black was trading with aliens. He was hit by men in black number one and force to eat a drug. Unfortunately he didnt die, but he had a serious problem with diarrhea the next morning. The problem was so bad he had to change his name and move to Papa new Guiana. His new name was Edogawa Conan.

洗衣机 · 发表于 2004-4-24 23:52:09

最初由无事小魔鬼发布
This is a good chance to pratice and improve your English writing skill, so don't ask anybody to write for you!

right!

Amy_xuru · 发表于 2004-4-25 00:26:43

搭挡上MSN

生死极端 · 发表于 2004-4-25 00:40:32

honeyrabbit321 · 发表于 2004-4-25 00:47:35

最初由生死极端发布
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存水有害健康~~要灌乾淨的水%&004

生死极端 · 发表于 2004-4-25 00:52:10

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请指教~~

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honeyrabbit321 · 发表于 2004-4-25 01:23:10

最初由生死极端发布
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请指教~~

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又存水%&142

Amy_xuru · 发表于 2004-4-25 01:30:37

%&018
两位都水水~~~

洗衣机 · 发表于 2004-4-25 07:45:03

最初由 Amy_xuru 发布
搭挡上MSN

现在上了，人呢

显示全部楼层 · 发表于 2004-4-25 09:45:46

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无情 · 发表于 2004-4-27 06:00:56

最初由 honeyrabbit321 发布
Kudo Shinichi, a high school drop out, went to a them park called “Wild and Crazy” with his boyfriend one day. He solved a case and found out a men in black was trading with aliens. He was hit by me．．．

喷。。。
某情严重失血。。。= =|||

赫兰 · 发表于 2004-4-28 03:16:14

HOHO~~~这就是英语上长的时间~~~

Meitantei · 发表于 2004-4-28 04:05:02

最初由 honeyrabbit321 发布
Kudo Shinichi, a high school drop out, went to a them park called “Wild and Crazy” with his boyfriend one day. He solved a case and found out a men in black was trading with aliens. He was hit by me．．．

%&142 %&142 %&142
very creative.... -_-|||||||||||||||||||||||||||
i've written a summary for conan(obviously not as creative and original as rabbit's summary.......)
if you're intereste it's in my website: http://www.conankun.com/summary.shtml
note: that's for reference only... plz do not copy that word for word....

eviltony · 发表于 2004-4-28 05:49:25

don't plagiarize

honeyrabbit321 · 发表于 2004-4-29 00:17:47

最初由无情发布
[QUOTE]最初由 honeyrabbit321 发布
Kudo Shinichi, a high school drop out, went to a them park called “Wild and Crazy” with his boyfriend one day. He solved a case and found out a men in bl．．．

總要加點香料吧%&018

honeyrabbit321 · 发表于 2004-4-29 00:18:55

最初由 Meitantei 发布
[QUOTE]最初由 honeyrabbit321 发布
Kudo Shinichi, a high school drop out, went to a them park called “Wild and Crazy” with his boyfriend one day. He solved a case and found out a men in bl．．．

換IP阿
之前都上不去阿%&004

Amy_xuru · 发表于 2004-4-29 08:54:06

最初由无情发布
[QUOTE]最初由 honeyrabbit321 发布
Kudo Shinichi, a high school drop out, went to a them park called “Wild and Crazy” with his boyfriend one day. He solved a case and found out a men in bl．．．

我也汗....|||
无语了....兔子好厉害.....

Amy_xuru · 发表于 2004-4-29 08:57:05

He was hit by men in black number one and force to eat a drug.

how about “he was bit by a rabbit number one and force to eat a carrot……

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