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                  Distance
    The furthest distance in the world is not between life and death ,it is that I am standing in front of you ,but you do not know that I love you .
                                        ------preface
                       (one)
  At the burial ground
  "Kuzuha,we are coming to see you ,the weather is becoming colder and colder,do you know?"says Ran with tears falling from her eyes,
锦瑟无端五十弦,一弦一柱思华年。 庄生晓梦迷蝴蝶,望帝春心拖杜鹃。 沧海月明珠有泪,蓝田日暖玉生烟。 此情可待诚追忆,只是当时已枉然。

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发表于 2005-5-1 20:24:13 |只看该作者

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"why ,shinichi, why this happened to Kuzuha?"
     "Maybe,it is de
锦瑟无端五十弦,一弦一柱思华年。 庄生晓梦迷蝴蝶,望帝春心拖杜鹃。 沧海月明珠有泪,蓝田日暖玉生烟。 此情可待诚追忆,只是当时已枉然。
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发表于 2005-5-2 11:25:14 |只看该作者

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too short.......
is it a tragedy??
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发表于 2005-5-2 12:47:51 |只看该作者

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sorry,my computer is broken .now I will give you more.
     "Maybe ,it is destined,no one can change it."says Kodo in a sad voice.
     "Destined? Maybe......"
     Suddenly,they hear that someone is singning"Every night in my dream,I see you I feel you ,that is how I know you go on......"
     They quickly go to the back of the tombstone,they see Heiji there! But it seems that he does not see them. Heiji says :"Kuzuha,I have said that I can sing better than you ,that  is ture!" Heiji brushes out laughter with some salty water coming into his mouth .
     "Hattori,are you Ok?"says Kudo,slightly.
     "How long have you been here,what have you heard?"
     "Your broken heart!"
     "Stupid,I am very well,very......" He can not say any more,tears are falling from his eyes quietly.
POLICE STATION
      "Do you know? we are going to have a new member,she is a woman .she  have just gruduated
from a famous police college,she is as old as our director Heiji and Kudo!"
      "Really? I hope she is a beautiful woman !"
  BURIAL GROUND
    "Let us go Kudo .I remenber that there will be a policewoman coming to register."
    "Oh, I nearly forget! Let us go , it is a bit late!"
    Heiji stand up ,but unwilling lo leave.
    "Go." Shinichi claps his shoulder and walk away with Ran. Heiji turns over,slowly but clearly says :" the furthest distance in the world is not between life and death ,it is I am standing in front of you ,but you do not know that I love you. Kuzuha,can you see my love? I am standing in front of you......"
  ON THE WAY TO THE POLICE STATION
     "Ei ,Hattori,you hope that she is a beatiful woman or not?"
     "I am driving ,do not talk to me!"Heiji feels that Ran is angry.
     "Shinichi!" "sorry......Ouch!"
     "Idiot!" Idiot? Kuzuha, you always say that I am a idiot.Heiji thingks. Then he stops at the gate .Why ,Kuzuha ,why you asked to dismantle the bombs? You shuold not have made such a stupid choice , you should have waited for me......Heiji thinks.
锦瑟无端五十弦,一弦一柱思华年。 庄生晓梦迷蝴蝶,望帝春心拖杜鹃。 沧海月明珠有泪,蓝田日暖玉生烟。 此情可待诚追忆,只是当时已枉然。
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发表于 2005-5-2 19:39:52 |只看该作者

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没有人看吗?好伤心啊!
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发表于 2005-5-2 20:14:50 |只看该作者

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看英文同人
好不习惯
至于quatity
实在是少了一点
活着便哭 哭到死 ——《乱》
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发表于 2005-5-3 10:10:36 |只看该作者

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呜呜呜呜呜,终于有人看了,好感动.我会努力的.由于我妈在,不敢发太多,我会尽量多发一点的.
锦瑟无端五十弦,一弦一柱思华年。 庄生晓梦迷蝴蝶,望帝春心拖杜鹃。 沧海月明珠有泪,蓝田日暖玉生烟。 此情可待诚追忆,只是当时已枉然。
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发表于 2005-5-3 10:26:43 |只看该作者

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搂住可以贴一份在海外啊~~XD
这样看的人多一点~~
I don't wanna lose you.

I don't wanna use you.

Just to have somebody by my side.

我何时才算长大?
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发表于 2005-5-3 11:03:33 |只看该作者

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"Hattori,do not be stupefied,get out quickly!"says Shinichi.
      Heiji stops thinking and get off the car.
      "Bye,Ran."Shinichi gives Ran a kiss."Bye,Ran,need I give you a kiss?"asked Heiji."Of course not!"says Shinichi angrily.
      "OK,OK,let us go."
  OFFICE
      "Hattori,coffee with out cream!""I know ,you are wordy!"Then Heiji go to the next room.
      "May I come in?"A female voice.
      "Come in please."
      "You are Kudo? here is my personal imformation."
      "So your name is ",Shinichi picks the paper up,"Kuzuha Hattori"
      "Yes"
      "Kuzuha Hattori?!" Shinichi raise his head,to his supprise, the woman is the same as Kuzuha!
      "Hattori,Hattori,come here quickly,quickly!"
      "You are really troublesome,what is wrong?"Heiji gives Shinichi a cup of coffee,"what is......"suddenly,he sees Kuzuha Hattori.He drops his cup,peng! The cup broke into pieces.
      "Kuzuha,Kuzuha,you did not die,you are still alive?!" Heiji hugs her and want to kiss her.But she pushes Heiji away,says:"Keep yourself cool,I am not your Kuzuha,I have been told that you have a girlfreind called Kuzuha and we look the same .but I can tell you ,I anm not her ,I am Kuzuha Hattori! Here is my ID card! Look it carefully!"
      "Sorry ,sorry",Shinichi apologizes and takes Heiji away,make him sit in the sofa.Then he begings to talk to Kuzuha Hattori.
      One hour later,"So you are in charge of the criminal group,you can leave and acquaint your
co-workers."
     She leaves the office at once.
     During that time, Heiji keeps silence all the time.A good while ,he says:"If Kuzaha did not  die ,now her name should also be Kuzuha Hattori."
      "Hattori......
      "I am OK."
THE HOME OF KUZUHA HATTORI  
       "GIN ,why!""Need not to know.you only need to work out a perfect plan to kill them ,that  is enough.""how about my sister?""when you kill them, I will give her antidotes."
      "Bye-Bye!"
  IN THE CAR
      "NO promblem?"Vodka asks."yes,we have let her eat up the poison,she has forgotten the past.
what is more,Kudo and Hattori will not hurt her,esp.Hattori,they will 'protect' her!HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA........."
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发表于 2005-5-3 11:05:03 |只看该作者

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[QUOTE=美雪]搂住可以贴一份在海外啊~~XD
这样看的人多一点~~[/QUOTE]
   
我会的,谢谢.
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